Old 08-05-2018, 12:03 AM   #1
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Close quarters here...damn trees. Tried to catch the train coming out the tube.
I'm trying to keep the train out of the center. DH
First rejection was for leaning.
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Second rejection was for composition.
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Third rejection was again....composition. http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...98&key=6710851
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Old 08-05-2018, 12:16 AM   #2
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Looks like they really don't want this one. Maybe let it sit for a while and then try a wider view?
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Old 08-06-2018, 12:08 PM   #3
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I think a vertical composition here would be more satisfying for what you're wanting to accomplish. The entire left side of the frame isn't providing proper balance.

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Good that your perseverance paid off, but you were literally inches away from obstruction by the hanging foliage.
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I think a vertical composition here would be more satisfying for what you're wanting to accomplish. The entire left side of the frame isn't providing proper balance.

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Sage advice from the Wilds of West Virginia. Well done Loyd with one L!!
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Well done Loyd with one L!!
And you get two cookies for realizing it. (Even though I've typed my name at the end of every post since 2006.)



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