Old 09-06-2013, 08:52 PM   #1
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Old 09-06-2013, 09:00 PM   #2
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More sky, it's too centered, maybe add a fuzz to the right too. Getting close to the edge.
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Old 09-06-2013, 09:11 PM   #3
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lighten your shadows and lower your highlights also, maybe mess with the exposure a bit more than that. That white area of gravel seems strong, and the train seems a bit dark for the sun you had.
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Old 09-06-2013, 09:27 PM   #4
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More sky, it's too centered, maybe add a fuzz to the right too. Getting close to the edge.
Definitely more sky and maybe a little sky on the bottom.
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Sent an earlier frame, I'll wait and see I guess, the rejected one looks more balanced to me.
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Old 09-06-2013, 09:43 PM   #6
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That one is 100 times better.
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Old 09-06-2013, 10:08 PM   #7
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The right is bugging me to death. Open that more and add the listed suggestions above.
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The right side is tight to keep out some construction barrels and other crap, earlier frame was accepted so I guess they wanted more smoke. Thanks guys
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Old 09-07-2013, 02:06 AM   #9
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The right side is tight to keep out some construction barrels and other crap, earlier frame was accepted so I guess they wanted more smoke. Thanks guys
For me:
1. needs more room on the right. If something ugly is there, make it go away...
2. if it was me, I would remove some on the left, that road really does nothing for me, and it's awkwardly cut off. I would remove the whole road and some of the trees to tighten up the left
3. reduce brightness or levels on the ballast, it's blinding me...
4. add a tad more contrast
5. lower levels in the sky just a tad

This is definitely fixable and should get on...
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Old 09-07-2013, 02:36 AM   #10
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Its on already
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I will never get tired of seeing these A&M Alco shots. Ever since I ventured down there three weeks ago I have been fascinated with their operation. Too bad it will come to an end with those hideous EMDs.
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