Old 10-28-2008, 02:35 PM   #1
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Default Brother, can you spare an opinion?

I'm on the fence, but leaning towards not liking this shot. It just can't get past the fog... the fog ruins it to me. I'm not planning to submit this, I'm just looking for some outside opinions. Otherwise, it would have been well lit

FWIW, I chased the ass off this guy to get him in a better position, but they are hard to get ahead of when I get stuck behind slowpokes. Oh well.

What do you think?
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Old 10-28-2008, 02:48 PM   #2
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Vertical balance poor, too empty on top. But more importantly, I like having much of the scene and all of the train fogged over, but only if there were something to see in the lower right foreground that would be clear/unfogged. The red grasses there are too formless to carry the scene as a counterweight to the train.

And for my tastes, the train is a bit too close to the right edge.

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Old 10-28-2008, 03:22 PM   #3
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Yeah, I can do way better on the crop... the thing I can't fix is the fog. Not a big deal, but I always like catching a BCOL unit. Real stubborn fog that morning, got some decent scenery/sunrise shots thanks to it, but it skunked me on two trains (a big deal up there, where 6 well lit trains is a good day).

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You know what, doesn't look too hot cropped either.
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