Old 08-11-2010, 06:16 PM   #1
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Default Interesting composition?

I'm thinking this is a comp reject because the clouds are too far above the signals.

http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...d=843880&key=0

Is the attached better? Or will it still get bad comp or cropping?
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Old 08-11-2010, 06:23 PM   #2
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The attached is better, but it still hs too much on the bottom. You don't know all of the shaded area.
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Old 08-11-2010, 06:28 PM   #3
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same width, just move the crop up?
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Old 08-11-2010, 06:31 PM   #4
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You may could lose some on the sides, come to think of it. The shadow man may have to go.
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I know you are going for the interesting composition, but if you had a zoomed in shot that included a better view of the things highlighted in your remarks, that might be better.
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I know you are going for the interesting composition, but if you had a zoomed in shot that included a better view of the things highlighted in your remarks, that might be better.
I do have the zoomed in shot, but trying to keep my shadow in, which like Joe said may have to go for RP. I dunno-toss up which is more interesting after they make the RP cut.
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