Michael, I see what you are trying to do, but don't care for the result. The tighter crop puts a lot of emphasis on an area combining a nose in shadow and a background just to the right in shadow. The rest of the photo looks better, but the focal point looks worse.
Frankly, I think it needs a reshoot. I would suggest shooting a bit earlier so one can fully see the two churches in the background. And a time of day when there is full nose light. Getting some elevation, say on a ladder, would be a welcome bonus.
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