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Old 07-29-2009, 02:30 PM   #3
cblaz
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For the first shot, the big blob of white in the sky at right is a real killer for me. It seems like you have plenty of space, may want to crop this down. You also need to fix the caption, where you say the engine is "leading the way into the setting sun." It is very obvious that the sun is just out of frame to the right and the train is heading away from it, hence the dark nose on the 100.
For the second shot, I echo what Chris said.
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Originally Posted by Christopher Muller View Post
The second one, the tree framing is more of a distraction than a frame.
If you had the whole train without the tree in the way, I think it would have a decent chance of being accepted.

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