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Old 06-22-2013, 01:56 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by Dennis A. Livesey View Post
Overall I like the attempt. It comes close but no cigar.

If the far truck had been centered, the picture would be much better. As it is, the far truck being "touched" as it were, hurts the composition.

In B&W, all you really have is exposure and contrast. While I think high contrast can work on many B&W's, I think it is hurting here.

Also the foreground is a jumble. Not sure what else to say.
Ok, thanks for your opinion. I see the flaws now that you point them, and I agree.
I had to look up "jumble" in the dictionary, it means something like "crowded"; the foreground is a coupler and I tried not to cut it, therefore a lot of black space was included too.

Regards and thank you.

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